Matt Bellamy

Hmm, this is good, I just think a few things need to be reworded, and I'm not quite sure how. :? I think you could omit "just" from the second ...

I've just had a look through and pointed out some suggestions that might make your poem sound a little better - no particular reason for some of these, just what ...

Ari, I have never seen sisters who look so alike! And all so pretty, too :)

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I like to wade through the unanswered posts and give some responses to lonely poems. :P

So pretty, star! And yoha, that's an awesome first pic there. Well, since I'm here... *ahem* And my hair isn't green, it's just a bad webcam :lol: . Oh and ...

So cute! ^_^

Adorable, a very loveable poem, and the dog sounded lovely. Some of the rhyming sounded a little forced, like "the way he'd never fail" - what does that mean? Also, ...

Haha, very cute! I don't think you need the - in Willie in the limerick, and I'd also suggest saying something like "And take a big bite" to make it ...

Why was this wonderful thread, declaring PANTS in the title, never replied to?! Big green spotty pants!

This is cute, although a little too simple. However, it is so short and simple that I think you could turn it into a haiku if you wanted. In case ...

I didn't think, just glancing at the second stanza, that I would like it, but I do. I really like the way it sounds, almost like it should be in ...

I love the tone to this, you have a unique poetic voice. The only thing I was unsure of was this: Love always accompanies self deceit you sang. This line ...

Great work, yet again. I think the final stanza, being shorter than the rest, and sounding so final, really summed up the poem. Also the imagery, particularly at the beginning, ...

This is an interesting idea. I like how you used personification to make the light seem like it feels like an outcast. The idea reminds me a little of November ...