Matt Bellamy

I like this. I don't like how you capitalized every word, but I like the format, which seems to resemble rain falling. A comma or two here and there wouldn't ...

Hmm, this is good, I just think a few things need to be reworded, and I'm not quite sure how. :? I think you could omit "just" from the second ...

I've just had a look through and pointed out some suggestions that might make your poem sound a little better - no particular reason for some of these, just what ...

Ari, I have never seen sisters who look so alike! And all so pretty, too :)

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I like to wade through the unanswered posts and give some responses to lonely poems. :P

So pretty, star! And yoha, that's an awesome first pic there. Well, since I'm here... *ahem* And my hair isn't green, it's just a bad webcam :lol: . Oh and ...

So cute! ^_^

Adorable, a very loveable poem, and the dog sounded lovely. Some of the rhyming sounded a little forced, like "the way he'd never fail" - what does that mean? Also, ...

Haha, very cute! I don't think you need the - in Willie in the limerick, and I'd also suggest saying something like "And take a big bite" to make it ...

Why was this wonderful thread, declaring PANTS in the title, never replied to?! Big green spotty pants!

This is cute, although a little too simple. However, it is so short and simple that I think you could turn it into a haiku if you wanted. In case ...

I didn't think, just glancing at the second stanza, that I would like it, but I do. I really like the way it sounds, almost like it should be in ...

I love the tone to this, you have a unique poetic voice. The only thing I was unsure of was this: Love always accompanies self deceit you sang. This line ...

Great work, yet again. I think the final stanza, being shorter than the rest, and sounding so final, really summed up the poem. Also the imagery, particularly at the beginning, ...